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'treasured Commodity'

The reflection says you've outgrown us I somehow feel sad – That which we once had has become redundant The other side of the coin says I should be happy ‘Cause you've found that inner power, the ability to go out on your own and yet letting go is like losing a part of me that object that I’ve grown accustomed too – So I’ll be a bit teary even feel a bit used but I’ll always be grateful no one knew the role you played sometimes not knowing is a treasured commodity ©120720121045

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/16/2012 9:16:00 PM
This is so wonderful, Wilma. You show such wisdom in your writing. how are you feeling since your surgery, sweetie?
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Date: 7/15/2012 3:06:00 PM
Wilma, this is exquisite and beautiful...something a Mother woruld say to her child..just awespme. Love it so much that I'm going to "fav" it. Get well soon and God bless always. Much love, Annalise
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Date: 7/14/2012 3:08:00 PM
You are an amazing poet. This is a slice of what an Angel you are. Cape Town Honey with a warm loving heart. Dr Michael with bag always ready for a house call. Luv n hugs Michael
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Date: 7/12/2012 12:08:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Wilma. I look forward to reading more of it as time permits. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2012 10:32:00 AM
softly intense poesy, wilms... sensitive and full of wisdom.. enjoyed the contrast approach.. best of luck and hugggs!
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Date: 7/12/2012 4:41:00 AM
Wilma, this is a very powerful write, with a wonderful message! I really enjoyed the immensity of this poem, it's got a special place in my heart! I just loved the dilemma between letting go and the will to move on! Fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 7/12/2012 4:20:00 AM
Love these indepth lines Wilma.Check for the typo'roll'.
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Date: 7/12/2012 3:10:00 AM
A fine read, Wilma, depicting the wrench of separation from whatever we had been used to, Jag
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