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Treading Water

Treading water Where did it all go wrong? What happened To those dreams and hopes Of yesteryear? Traded in for hard currency They're drifting further and further away And you can't summon up the strength To save them from the abyss Now you're owned by the bank, Climbing up debt mountain As responsibilities snap away At your heels You used to laugh at the lottery And all those desperate saps Now it's your only escape From 40 years hard labour Treading water How long before you start to sink? But something always keeps you kicking When it's easier to drown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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