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Treating life as though it were a game
Years go by and you still feel the same
Seems to you like it's all been mapped
Choices made and now you feel trapped
Make a wish upon that distant star
Struggle like a firefly inside a jar
Once knew freedom in your younger days
Reveled in the joy of your wandering ways
Dream of the past as the years go by
Wild and crazy, now some times you cry
Joys and sorrow, success and strife
All have purpose in a human life
Like a summer night without a moon
A set of lyrics that have no tune 
Some times you feel an emptiness inside
Like a place inside your heart has died
There's a light, on each one of us it beams
if  you believe they can't take way your dreams
Look beyond your problems and you'll find
Feeling trapped is just a state of mind
When you know that your heart is true
You find your skies will be turning blue

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  1. Date: 10/24/2011 10:38:00 AM
    An uplifting write. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 8:32:00 PM
    so true, so true, thank you ~N

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 6:55:00 PM
    expect believe that it comes good, be as loving as you should, change the mood as might i would, for dreams become sometimes... on ya mate....

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 3:11:00 PM
    Brilliant, Vince. We do let fears make us feel trapped, but we only need to see beyond ourselves to realize that this is but a temprorary "state of mind." Having faith helps break this barrier. Love and blessings my friend, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/5/2011 10:47:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poem and the encouragment it offers. BG

  1. Date: 10/5/2011 9:59:00 PM
    ya know... one of the main things i've been noticing lately... is what a beautiful color the sky is these days. Thanks for the write, Vince. Namaste~N