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Transcendence

The distant mountain is ablaze Sun rain clouds blend majesty From my perch on the lookout hill All land between is ocean Clouds like white waves obscure the Earth I bathe in that transcendence

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Lily Twinkle

Date: 5/6/2014 10:54:00 AM

Beautifully crafted imagery... an enjoyable read.

Daver Austin
Date: 5/6/2014 11:11:00 AM

Thanks Lily. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2011 7:08:00 PM

Daver.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/9/2011 4:35:00 PM

A lovely picture..well done Dave-r..congrats on being featured. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/9/2011 8:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Daver. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/9/2011 4:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/8/2011 5:34:00 PM

Congrats Daver on your featured poem this week on P.S. ..a super great write to share with us all my friend with luv...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2010 1:46:00 PM

this is awesome, a FAV!! (and yes, I often hunger just to eat good food I think you and I both love food too much!)

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/22/2008 12:21:00 PM

of succeeding at the dementional shift that is coming...things about to transpire have been known by all ancient men/religions/tribes for thoughsands of yrs, and it is due again to occur come 2012. anyway...hope this makes sense! Take care, Kristin

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/22/2008 12:19:00 PM

Hey Mr. Daver! This seemed like a good title from which to try to explain Beneath God's Mt. Well, have you ever read any Z. Sitchin? It is mostly based on his studies, and the studies of the God's/2012 from the perspective of all major religions of today and yesterday coming to the same conclusions...how this universe and all universes/planets/beings are watching us and waiting to see what happens/what the colective consciousness of here will end up as...if we are capable od succeeding...

Date: 8/13/2008 1:53:00 PM

Nice use of imagery in this short format. The creative spacing adds visual interest and gives the reader a bit of a pause. Interesting reflection. Karen

James Foulk

Date: 8/13/2008 12:43:00 PM

You painted a perfect picture of what you wrote. A very refreshing piece of poetry.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/13/2008 7:30:00 AM

Sounds like a breathtaking place to be. Vince

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/12/2008 4:53:00 PM

Such a vivid and beautiful mental picture this evokes. Well done. Regards Heidie

P Sheart

Date: 8/12/2008 2:15:00 PM

This takes my spirit away to a place I already am in my knowing. You bring it to life with such beautiful poetic vision, that I just want to sit appreciate it for awhile. Thanks for sharing hun. Blessings to you and yours. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/12/2008 1:42:00 PM

Visually awe-inspiring. I would love to be there. Glorious. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/12/2008 9:05:00 AM

Gorgeous, Daver! Wow, so clear and awesome - magestic write from the soul - awesome, love Kristin

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/12/2008 8:42:00 AM

These words paint pictures, provide imagery that we as the readers can become a part of. What an effect! Terrific flow and just an awesome read. Michael