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Tranquility Belied

Fall trees stand empty, water washed away their souls. Wasted reflections. For tranquility contest

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Date: 5/3/2010 4:31:00 PM
beautiful yet sad haiku--I could picture this in my mind---each line carries itself, thanks for sharing JT :)
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Date: 4/18/2010 12:56:00 AM
A fine meaningful haiku
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Date: 4/17/2010 6:43:00 AM
This is how I felt about the photo, too, John. I saw dying trees and they did not make me feel peaceful, just sad. You have a beautiful haiku here! Love, Carolyn
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