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Birth, Time; The World!

I have got a long life with a dog-eared corpse.
Explicit heart has not exposed by the verses of the poems!

In the paralyzed residing I can’t go in front of me,
I can’t return to the back of mine!
I hear the vigilance of existence with the unbelievable truth.

I have been created from the globule of subsistence.
I have enchanted many by self-centeredness!
I couldn’t establish the exemplary of gratitude!
I don’t see by seeing how the fire is created from the green trees!
I don’t understand by understanding what might be as like that skies and earth!
Determination breaks down- 
To be returned to the purity of the ultimate.

How many days will I be like this?
To whom all the rights belonged,
Will I be able to go towards him at any time!


June 19, 2009
Kallyanpur, Dhaka;

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  1. Date: 6/19/2009 8:40:00 AM
    beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 3:24:00 PM
    He gave you life to live. Stop trying not to live and run back to him..did you do the living you were sent to do..yet? Have you found you? Nice perplexing write! Keep thinking but go live too! Light & Love