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Touching Me

my every thought lingers in the passion that is you every touch is like the wind airbrushing the lake soft ripples flowing towards the center vanishing until the next brush of your hands gently gliding down each kiss paints me autumn's colors making my breath rise then fall like the shadows on walls as the sun seduces the clouds each day i grow more vibrant in color blushed of horizon's edge and shine with the same brilliance from within this heart that's filled with love because of you... Written Oct 24, 2012 Entered on Nov 8, 2019 Love is the answer poetry contest sponsored by LuLoo

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Date: 11/23/2019 6:41:00 PM
BAck with my congrats on this FAVE poem of mine!! (I stupidly went and forgot to even enter it)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2019 6:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea, i been forgetting to enter some too...i write and post then forget to go to the contest and enter them....
Date: 11/20/2019 11:34:00 AM
Wonderful write Sandy congrats on another fine win!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 11:42:00 AM
Thank you John...i guess i should try and write more love poems, i had to travel back to my beginning on soup to find one good enough for the contest...sigh
Date: 11/20/2019 8:08:00 AM
Lovely, Sandra, especially the 3rd stanza-- congrats on your win!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 10:01:00 AM
thank you so much :)
Date: 11/20/2019 7:39:00 AM
how can I say what I want to say? Beautifully expressed sweet Sandra. Your passion resounds in love and romance. Loved every word...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 8:29:00 AM
Thank you my sweet friend I wish my muse would paint with that passion again instead of the darker tones she often uses .. thank you for hosting so many wonderful contests. Hugs
Date: 11/19/2019 10:43:00 PM
Hi Sandra congrats on your win :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 8:29:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 11/19/2019 4:32:00 PM
Congrats Sandy on your win in the contest. I knew you would be up there at the top.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/19/2019 6:25:00 PM
Thank you, congrats to you as well!
Date: 11/19/2019 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/19/2019 6:24:00 PM
Thank you so much :) congrats to you as well...
Date: 11/8/2019 4:03:00 PM
This is what I call a love poem, the feelings you express are exactly that...love. The love for another that makes you feel so giddy inside that you can't contain your self. Love sure looks good on you.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 7:07:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend...my muse doesn't pen this type of love often... glad you enjoyed this one and you sweet comment made me smile :) hugs
Date: 12/15/2012 1:08:00 AM
wowow, this is gorgeous. FAVE
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Date: 11/12/2012 11:09:00 AM
One of your best pieces!! Such great words you have put together with finesse hugs n more Michael
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Date: 11/1/2012 1:15:00 AM
This was so very beautiful, nicely done, Sandra, thanks so much, blessings Carl
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Date: 10/31/2012 12:37:00 PM
You have a wonderful way of tieing together nature and love. Your quite the young romantic. It's nice. :)
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Date: 10/25/2012 2:32:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with me and my morning coffee today Sandra. - Have a nice day. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/25/2012 12:09:00 AM
fabulous write Sandra... like like like your write.. enjoyed!!! thanks for sharing ...:) luv SK <3<3<3
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Date: 10/24/2012 7:21:00 PM
the line "as the sun seduces the clouds" paints nature in a mischevious way, and the motion of the wind on the lake has a soft mysterious intent behind it. I like how the poem encircles you in nature's vibrant way
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