Touching Me

my every thought
lingers in the passion
that is you

every touch
is like the wind
airbrushing the lake
soft ripples flowing
towards the center
vanishing 
until the next brush
of your hands
gently gliding
down

each kiss
paints me autumn's colors
making my breath rise
then fall like the shadows
on walls as the sun seduces
the clouds

each day
i grow more vibrant
in color blushed
of horizon's edge
and shine
with the same brilliance
from within this heart
that's filled with love
because of you...


Written Oct 24, 2012
Entered on Nov 8, 2019
Love is the answer poetry contest
sponsored by LuLoo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 11/23/2019 6:41:00 PM
BAck with my congrats on this FAVE poem of mine!! (I stupidly went and forgot to even enter it)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2019 6:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea, i been forgetting to enter some too...i write and post then forget to go to the contest and enter them....
Date: 11/20/2019 11:34:00 AM
Wonderful write Sandy congrats on another fine win!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 11:42:00 AM
Thank you John...i guess i should try and write more love poems, i had to travel back to my beginning on soup to find one good enough for the contest...sigh
Date: 11/20/2019 8:08:00 AM
Lovely, Sandra, especially the 3rd stanza-- congrats on your win!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 10:01:00 AM
thank you so much :)
Date: 11/20/2019 7:39:00 AM
how can I say what I want to say? Beautifully expressed sweet Sandra. Your passion resounds in love and romance. Loved every word...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
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Date: 11/20/2019 8:29:00 AM
Thank you my sweet friend I wish my muse would paint with that passion again instead of the darker tones she often uses .. thank you for hosting so many wonderful contests. Hugs
Date: 11/19/2019 10:43:00 PM
Hi Sandra congrats on your win :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 8:29:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 11/19/2019 4:32:00 PM
Congrats Sandy on your win in the contest. I knew you would be up there at the top.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/19/2019 6:25:00 PM
Thank you, congrats to you as well!
Date: 11/19/2019 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/19/2019 6:24:00 PM
Thank you so much :) congrats to you as well...
Date: 11/8/2019 4:03:00 PM
This is what I call a love poem, the feelings you express are exactly that...love. The love for another that makes you feel so giddy inside that you can't contain your self. Love sure looks good on you.
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Date: 11/20/2019 7:07:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend...my muse doesn't pen this type of love often... glad you enjoyed this one and you sweet comment made me smile :) hugs
Date: 12/15/2012 1:08:00 AM
wowow, this is gorgeous. FAVE
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Date: 11/12/2012 11:09:00 AM
One of your best pieces!! Such great words you have put together with finesse hugs n more Michael
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Date: 11/1/2012 1:15:00 AM
This was so very beautiful, nicely done, Sandra, thanks so much, blessings Carl
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Date: 10/31/2012 12:37:00 PM
You have a wonderful way of tieing together nature and love. Your quite the young romantic. It's nice. :)
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Date: 10/25/2012 2:32:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with me and my morning coffee today Sandra. - Have a nice day. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/25/2012 12:09:00 AM
fabulous write Sandra... like like like your write.. enjoyed!!! thanks for sharing ...:) luv SK <3<3<3
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Date: 10/24/2012 7:21:00 PM
the line "as the sun seduces the clouds" paints nature in a mischevious way, and the motion of the wind on the lake has a soft mysterious intent behind it. I like how the poem encircles you in nature's vibrant way
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