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softly touching (I feel a stir...)
upon keys
a piano speaks
in cello
fluttering chords
tugs strings 
deep within
(a deep tingling sensation within...)

sadness flows (My eyes tracing...)
dancing with emotion
feelings flowing
a river
joining hearts
flowing an ocean
in salted emotions
(a focused soul with open arms...)

our world (I embrace with joy...)
so much suffering
powerless to help
on baited breath
shawled within crying
fluttering so gently
a floating breeze
each string cries
(as my heart flutters above oceans...)

as the piano speaks (I hear a soft whisper...)
softly telling 
the story
a wounded sparrow
cries a songbird
fluttering broken wing
(as my fingers reach out to caress...)

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  1. Date: 10/22/2013 7:00:00 AM
    quite the romantic poet of love you brought this alive Liam good pen Shadow x smile hugs

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 3:21:00 AM
    Wonderful write! Can feel the sadness of our plight. Soon suffering will end! (Revelation21:4)

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 2:54:00 AM
    Beautiful write my friend. Wish I could hear you play. Thanks for sharing, I'll be sending this one to my talented piano playing will become his fav of all time I'm sure!

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 12:34:00 AM
    Wow a superb imaginative poem full of passion n compassion, seems to b playing tapping like soft notes n music! Enjoyd. Cheers.

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 7:13:00 PM
    this is very touching indeed. just like the title of it, your poem touches the reader with its lilting beauty, Liam!

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 3:44:00 PM
    Wow..This is sooo romantic I love the way you created another short poem within the brackets..I love the last comforting and tender.I can hear the music as the piano plays..I love the piano..Going to my fvs

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 11:33:00 AM
    Hey Liam, Wonderful romantic write my friend.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:33:00 AM
    I could almost hear the piano music on the edge of my imagination. Well written Liam.

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 8:15:00 AM
    - Liam, sweet and romantic as always - Touching poem today, love it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 6:19:00 AM
    Liam....this is tender and sweet and loving. You have a caring and sweet heart. Broken wings need mending. Great write, my dear.