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. The sunlight pierces the dark clouds It's warmth touches my face As it dries the raindrops 'pon trees The Dove coos from its place All seems well until the Dove flies Then clouds cover the sun The cat and Princess both want me A peaceful place now done Cindy wins the warm lap and curls She wants to sleep and sleeps Princess pitter patters tippy Toe, in sadness she weeps

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/5/2013 11:00:00 PM
Enjoyed this poem. And I love cats. Well done.
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Date: 4/4/2013 12:13:00 PM
Sara; This is a beautiful verse. Thanks for sharing it with us. God bless you...... Lucilla
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Date: 4/3/2013 2:54:00 PM
this is sure a sweet one. You let yourself get inspired in so many different ways, Sara. Keep up the creative quill.
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Date: 4/3/2013 5:39:00 AM
This is harmonious, a grand write you have written here Sara! I somehow had missed this lovely poem my friend! This piece is simply grandiose and wondrous, I loved reading it this morning! Such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/2/2013 5:38:00 PM
wanted to stop by and say hello.hope all is well.good luck on upcoming contest.have entered a few but can't seem to get better than 6th.better than nothing i suppose.take care
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Date: 4/2/2013 4:43:00 PM
Natures little dance in time. You've expressed so well with your little rhyme.
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Date: 4/1/2013 4:43:00 PM
Oh Sara...loved this one too...you paint such lovely pictures....Donna
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Date: 4/1/2013 4:35:00 PM
Beautiful piece. ...l can hear the Dove cooing , and the pitter patter tippy sounds!
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Date: 4/1/2013 2:48:00 PM
Sara a beautiful piece of work...David
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Date: 4/1/2013 1:35:00 PM
time to get the dove.
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Date: 4/1/2013 10:34:00 AM
awww, love this sweet write and could picture the little Princess and your cat Cindy : )
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