Touched

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The sunlight pierces the dark clouds
     It's warmth touches my face
As it dries the raindrops 'pon trees
    The Dove coos from its place

All seems well until the Dove flies
   Then clouds cover the sun
The cat and Princess both want me
    A peaceful place now done 

Cindy wins the warm lap and curls
   She wants to sleep and sleeps
Princess pitter patters tippy
   Toe, in sadness she weeps
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 4/5/2013 11:00:00 PM
Enjoyed this poem. And I love cats. Well done.
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Date: 4/4/2013 12:13:00 PM
Sara; This is a beautiful verse. Thanks for sharing it with us. God bless you...... Lucilla
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Date: 4/3/2013 2:54:00 PM
this is sure a sweet one. You let yourself get inspired in so many different ways, Sara. Keep up the creative quill.
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Date: 4/3/2013 5:39:00 AM
This is harmonious, a grand write you have written here Sara! I somehow had missed this lovely poem my friend! This piece is simply grandiose and wondrous, I loved reading it this morning! Such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/2/2013 5:38:00 PM
wanted to stop by and say hello.hope all is well.good luck on upcoming contest.have entered a few but can't seem to get better than 6th.better than nothing i suppose.take care
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Date: 4/2/2013 4:43:00 PM
Natures little dance in time. You've expressed so well with your little rhyme.
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Date: 4/1/2013 4:43:00 PM
Oh Sara...loved this one too...you paint such lovely pictures....Donna
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Date: 4/1/2013 4:35:00 PM
Beautiful piece. ...l can hear the Dove cooing , and the pitter patter tippy sounds!
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Date: 4/1/2013 2:48:00 PM
Sara a beautiful piece of work...David
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Date: 4/1/2013 1:35:00 PM
time to get the dove.
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Date: 4/1/2013 10:34:00 AM
awww, love this sweet write and could picture the little Princess and your cat Cindy : )
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