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Below is the poem entitled TOTAL BLISS which was written by poet Dawn mclaughlin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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 Have you ever walked in a dream

 stepping on air floating

 imagine this

 ice blue sky

 sapphire stars flicker bright

 trees alive the bark spark

 twigs and branches

 arms reaching eyes glance

 streams open the fish

 in harmony they sing

 imagine this

 bees honey always hurry

 steady the flow

 time here oh so slow

 snails slow come too a stop

 butterfly sat upon a flower

 a scent of a blossoms nectre

 imagine this

 beautiful in sleep total bliss.

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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 9:26:00 AM
    This is bliss like alot reminds me of one I wrote called a state of ecstacy cool xx davidscott

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 1:53:00 PM
    Total beauty here Dawn and I'm not just talking about your pic... Had to come and see after you commented on mine about dreams... love yours my Poet friend... luv Michael

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 9:10:00 PM
    I like this and I can sure imagine it When you have dreams like this you don't want to wake up. Thanks for sharing and thanks for reading my poem. Lucilla