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Total Bliss

Questions bordering the edges Demons causing uncertain wedges To touch the deepest darkest side Breach the abyss so deep and wide Go on inside the hollow cave Search for the little girl to save Aura around that feels so eerie Hesitation and frozen with leery Trembling wires within and throughout Frozen in time with pondering doubt Crouching down spying a peek Sleeping there so sound asleep Courage lagged but came on back Because burning desire there is no lack The Demons are relentless this is so true Yet not as strong if we so choose Spirits abound sent you to free The sleeping girl whom you choose to see Then captured her from within the deep Carried she off and safely keep Ever so gentle was then to be told Her mind and Spirit to be so bold Because she chose to stay all alone Tricked by Demons cold as a stone O Gentle One sent to wake her up Then drinking from that half full cup Giving from inside all that there is Moving clouds across sunshine. Total Bliss Copyright © by Scarlett Anderson Written February 2, 2010 Note: This poem was inspired and dedicated to someone special I am interested in dating after 7 years of being divorced and single.

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Date: 2/3/2010 10:09:00 AM
It has been a pleasure to read your enchanting poem today Scarlett. Thank you so much for posting and sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2010 7:36:00 AM
Great write Scarlett and wish u well if u take the plunge.. its Valentine's Day on the horizon so go for it girl..luv.. Linda-Marie.
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Date: 2/3/2010 7:22:00 AM
the total bliss at the end shows you are ready to take the PLUNGE. Go for it, and I wish you well!! How wonderful you found a gentle soul!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/2/2010 4:39:00 PM
I liked the way the words felt together, but i didnt understand it
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