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Torturous Rain

Cascading down my back Are drops of torturous rain They never seem to ever lack Cascading down my back This hurtful elaborate track Of disastrous crushing pain Cascading down my back Are drops of torturous rain
Russell Sivey Entrant into Carol Brown's "RAINDROPS FALLING" contest 8/17/2012

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  1. Date: 9/2/2012 12:12:00 PM
    I love that you wrote a triolet! A fantastic write!! A belated congrats on your wonderful win, and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 11:19:00 AM
    RUSSELL, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:57:00 PM
    Awww that does not sound very good Russ, raining weather can make one ache! Glad to share 2nd with you! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 1:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on a super win Russell xx

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Classical piece,Russel..Short and precise....Congrats on your superb win in this contest...

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:07:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Russell. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 12:20:00 PM
    It WOULD be tortuous to have it keep cascading down one's back. nice to see you trying triolet, Russell.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 8:58:00 PM
    get a brumby brella 4 ya back, as robert says in his words jack, stay outa da rain inside, leave the rain 2 ride, torture on the slide, good one Russell, i abide...

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 8:03:00 PM
    Get yourself an umbrella or go indoors. Good write Russell.