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Tortured Dreams

They think i'm well,
and everything's alright,
they cant save me from this hell,
i'm trapped in tonight.
I've created a dungeon,
inside of my mind,
hidden my sanity away,
for no one to find.
Stuck inside,
a prison made for me,
100 year sentence,
no sign of getting free.
My bottle is broke,
emotions run loose,
the only comforting thought,
is what i can do with this noose.
I tie it to a tree,
stand up on a chair,
i'm going to jump,
this life i just cant bare.
As my neck snaps,
I can see a light beam,
I open my eyes,
it was just a dream.

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  1. Date: 2/21/2012 8:01:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Amanda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 4:53:00 PM
    Amanda, You have a beautiful name. I know that has nothing to do with anything, but I had to get that in. Your poem is wonderful. Well done. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe

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    Date: 2/20/2012 6:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well thank you! :)
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 11:54:00 AM
    Congrats with your well deserved win,Amanda! TC,Arild

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 4:08:00 AM
    Congratulations Amanda a well deserved win xx

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 8:59:00 PM
    Congrats. Amanda on your special win, love,vie

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 7:53:00 PM
    AMANDA.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD