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Torn Strings

An opened valve of tears lusting a smoldering lament, vocals vanish from the ears, fermenting an anger of consent. With powerless loss of reason, the self inflicted curse of hope, a vile taste of treason, dreams shattered in myope. Striding through a darkened tunnel the light flickers less bright. Squashed down through on life's funnel, disappearing out of sight, caught out by the blistering pace of romantic plight!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/1/2011 11:48:00 PM
Ah yes, I know the feeling - so well told with that ouch of irresistable sadness.
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