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Took To the Dog Pound

I woke up one morning and there was no sound As I got out of bed I looked at the ground He wasn't there where was my dog I looked in the rain and searched in the fog I couldn't find him so I looked by the bay And then I just relized he got taken away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/22/2009 6:41:00 PM
missing dog stories, wheww! brings back memories...nice work! Chris! Jim
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Date: 4/2/2009 10:57:00 AM
aww poor pooch, a well written poe, God bless from diane
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Date: 4/1/2009 5:59:00 PM
You spin a very witty yarn, Chris! I'll bet your dog was glad to see you arrive at the pound. I love poems about pets; these loyal companions mean a great deal to the people "they own." Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/1/2009 5:15:00 PM
good job chris on this .....I was sure hoping you were going to find him!
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Date: 4/1/2009 5:04:00 PM
Nice acrsotic, a sad ending though...Raul
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Date: 4/1/2009 3:08:00 PM
this poems awsome but you miss spelled searched..lol
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Date: 4/1/2009 3:00:00 PM
I love the rhyming in this couplet lol ur so retarded...Love Stina
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Date: 4/1/2009 1:43:00 PM
You express well the confusion and sadness of the story in this poem. Well done, Smiles from Lolita
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