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Too Young

She held me vice like frozen to the floor with just her eyes those big blue eyes her lashes were short but her stories were long and the tears lasted longer than I'd ever seen before In a person so young. She didn't weep out of want but out of need for someone to understand 'too young' I said but inside my head for I had to be strong she needed someone to depend on and although i was younger and couldn't interpret the abuse I could feel the pain from her eyes and I knew I needed to protect her so I gave her a shoulder and I tried to be bolder I kept her away from him whenever I could slumber parties we lied just to get her away from the clutches of evil in a normal house where no one suspected but I knew it's secrets.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/27/2016 1:08:00 PM
ABBEY, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 8/16/2011 6:14:00 PM
well done well written
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Date: 8/16/2011 8:55:00 AM
compelling story Abbey, very well expressed...thanks for sharing...smiles...chiquita
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Date: 8/16/2011 8:24:00 AM
Very powerful,strength and supportive write. Blessings Paul
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Date: 8/15/2011 6:22:00 PM
"her lashes were short but her stories were long"... nice line. Compelling write, Abbey
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Abbey Haigh
Date: 8/15/2011 6:24:00 PM
Thankyou Nancy, I'm pleased you like it x

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