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Too Fat

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Too Fat

He is too fat,
still my cat hunts.
The rat escapes.


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  1. Date: 11/18/2011 6:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "Than-Bauk" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 12:31:00 PM
    Many good wishes Joyce on this win..!

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 2:13:00 AM
    Congratulations this wonderful win in the contest of Rick, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 7:11:00 PM
    He, he, he! I know what you mean. My Dachshund is very fat, in fact, so fat that a Coyote changed his mind to grab him and carry my dog away... :0) Congratulations for your win, dear Joyce! Love, iolanda

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 2:15:00 PM
    VERY good one, Joyce. congrats on top ten.

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 1:38:00 PM
    Poor Garfield!!!!! This is a cartoon looking image, Joyce...fun and playful....well, for the rats that is. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 1:35:00 PM
    How did I miss this one? My cats were lazy and field mice had a "field day" in my garage. This gave me a great laugh. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Hope you have a happy Thanksgiving. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 6:27:00 AM
    LOL Me, too...too fat, but I don't hunt! I enjoyed Than-bauk, today. Big Smiles. (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 6:39:00 PM
    HAHA!! Oh, man, I can see it, Joyce, love it :D ~N