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Without bones 
slices deep feelings 
cuts like 
a knife emotions 
Without loosing 
one single 
drop of blood 
can tear 
the heart asunder 

Can kill thousands 
one lethal weapon 
a tongue 
mightier than 
the sword 
Can deeply cut 
with a razor edge 
like a cat 
o nine tails 

Speaking in forks 
lashing each word 
tearing flesh within 
Bleeding inside 
the truth prevails 
Lies in 
the fork 
broken hearted 
in truth 
a deadly weapon

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  1. Date: 11/10/2013 1:20:00 PM
    Liam This is a deep and intense write. Words can destroy someone in the worst way. We need to be careful what and how we say things to others Nice job

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 5:37:00 PM
    The power of the tongue. You painted a deadly picture with your words. Nice imagery.