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Tom Tit

beware of the triple curse, aflame, green fire burns out a name, on a tombstone sombre lit, beware of ol Tom Tit, a legendary name... half wit... insane... a bit... so lame ...... re Russell Siveys "Where Skeletons Lay" Don

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  1. Date: 10/4/2012 8:09:00 AM
    Take out the last line and you can call it a shape.

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:24:00 AM
    wonderful story is this, Don,

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 11:09:00 PM
    Don, always enjoying your way with poetry... now I will look up Russell's... goodnight..pd

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 4:38:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Winner for sure..Sara

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:21:00 PM
    Don, long time since been on here, I like this tale of bones long since laid to rest..Dave

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 5:32:00 PM
    Wonderful, simply wonderful my friend, I really do love it! I love how you took my poem and created yours, so very fine and wondrous! You interpretation is fantastic, I really enjoyed your perfected poem, you did awesome! What a significant piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 3:15:00 PM
    Nice... Terry