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Tokens of Jealously

Balassi stanza

as fickle love is cruel, makes of many a fool as hearts are many broken “tokens of Jealously” `kept of hearts zealously’ as hurtful words are spoken hearts do become word graves as jealousy gains slaves common as subway tokens ================= For and In honor of Dr Ram And contest: Balassi Stanza By John Moses Freeman

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  1. Date: 10/24/2011 7:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Balassi Stanza" contest Moses. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 11:12:00 PM
    Congratulations John. this is an exceptional rhyme. Jealousy and hurtful words, best to be avoided. well done...Margaret

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 10:09:00 PM
    Dear John Moses, Congratulations on YOUR 2nd Place Win in Dr. Ram's Contest "Balassi Stanza " Hearts do become word graves " I've read this several Times the Whole Balassi yet the last 3 lines are very Moving to me Well Deserved Win. With LOVE, ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege... Harry (HG)

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 3:54:00 PM
    Fickle and zealous.. coupla mischievous ones, those. Congrats on the win and thanks for the write, John. Namaste~N

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 10:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your second place, John. Jealousy is a disease that can kill both love and friendship. Some people show it vegefully with hurtful words. Love is kindness and understanding, but many fail to see these's a cruel society so uncaring and arrogant. I wish you more wins in the near future. Have a wonderful Sunday and smile. Peace and Love, Andrew.

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 8:32:00 AM
    Congrats Moses on an amazing win with this super fantastic entry for the contest my friend.. luv..

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 6:59:00 AM
    Excellent write, Congrats. on your win John. Love,Vie

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 5:06:00 AM
    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 3:39:00 AM
    Congratulations on the second place win in my contest, John

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 8:24:00 PM
    Hi John just a heads up I think Ram said it a blog what he wanted the verse labled..I think it was rhyme? but check..Light & Love

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    Date: 10/1/2011 10:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Debbie, he said it was ok under Ballad. Agape, Moses
  1. Date: 9/27/2011 5:53:00 PM
    That's why we are warned not to give in to envy or pride. Very nicely done my friend. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 9/26/2011 7:15:00 PM
    Good luck in Dr. Ram's contest..Reads like a winner to me..Much truth in your lines..Sara

  1. Date: 9/26/2011 2:36:00 PM
    Delighted to see you posted here today Moses. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/25/2011 6:22:00 PM
    really enjoyed this piece John , best of luck in the contest