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Togetherness is wrong

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Togetherness is wrong

She says she loves me but she is not there. 
When together our hearts is never clear. 
As we walk on our midnight strolls. 
Hands are together but feeling so cold.

Wanting the feeling of the first time.
But really knowing I am being left behind.

Souls is crushing fading away.
Togetherness is wrong.
Why do we stay.

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  1. Date: 5/2/2012 7:14:00 AM
    Touching poem Jack, but well written and good. - Have a lovely day to you. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 7:02:00 AM
    Srouses feelings... Very nic... Terry (By the way, thanks foor your kind words...)