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Together In Love

      This is our season, we still are one,

our time together, under the sun.

  Im sorry again, i have done wrong,

how many times, the nights were long.

  To stay with me, after what i have done,

i will never know why, you just didn't run.

  I dont understand, your faithful heart,

or not wanting to make, a brand new start.

  You said it hurt, and left the room,

could i explain, the scent of perfume.

  I try to change, but in some way,

you kept me close, not letting me stray.

  You took my life, forever in yours,

wanting me to know, it's loving shores.

  Somehow you knew, the future was set,

together in love, as when we met.

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  1. Date: 11/24/2011 12:13:00 AM
    JOHN.., ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! I ENJOYED YOUR POEM,,, VERY MOVING.. I TRULY LOVE IT..`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 12:50:00 AM
    * “Some Loves Have No True Barriers Which Cannot Breached * My Dear Sweet Precious John * Some Loves Are Meant Literally, Forevermore * Twas Such A Joy to Find Your Wonderful Loving Heart Amid My Box Earliar This Late Night * I Hope That You Shall Continue to Write & Post In That, I Shall See You Again * Very Lovely Painting In Love * Luv Always * Sarah.” *

  1. Date: 11/4/2011 6:45:00 PM
    Just needed to read this special verse again. So nice to find a poet that does justice to the art.

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 3:55:00 PM
    Ain't love Grand? Especially when you have it in all the right places. This is soft and lovely John, a great poem , Thanks for your visit, I appreciate your kind comment.

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 6:26:00 PM
    sensitive and sweet John.. a man who knows he done wrong and recognizes his true luv in front of him all the time.. nicely penned to project this emotion my friend.. super.. luv..

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 9:04:00 PM
    nice piece of the worX. I need to knock the dust off some of my old shoeboxes and post some of my really old works... ~JSLambert

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 2:00:00 PM
    this is such a sweet love poem, very romantic, good use of rhyme too...and thank you for your kind comments on my poems :-)

  1. Date: 5/21/2011 4:10:00 AM
    * “Together In Love * Together As One * The Perfect Dream * The Perfect Union * Expressed Very Lovingly & Extremely Well * My Dear John * Love Will Swim The Deeepest Oceans * If Luv Is True. * Hugs & Kisses * Sarah” *

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 1:25:00 PM
    John this is beautiful and says a lot about you . A exquisite poem. Thank you for your uplifting words. Your friend Anne

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 2:11:00 PM
    Wow such a great read.It touches my soul with your words I really enjoyed it.Thanks for sharing and your kind comment John.~Teresa~

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 1:26:00 PM
    Lovely and romantic John.. sweet words .. enjoyed reading this delight..check out my new blog posted about the new poets ..u are listed luv..

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 6:21:00 PM
    You know it's always a blessing to find the perfect woman. I'm glad you have my friend. R.M.

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 4:36:00 PM
    This is very emotional and has a universal appeal for forgiveness in love....I salute ur brevity of imagination and creation !