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Toes of Rain

August spills rains with tapped grains, like pearl veins on roofs Drenched in soft hue, toes play new songs of blue night’s chant ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Norma Arana

Date: 4/1/2014 11:57:00 PM

Hey Nette, congratulations on your poem being featured this week.Your images, so delicate and rich for a short form!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/17/2012 5:38:00 PM

Hi nette I check my than bauk thanks for the heads up my syllable counter only counted diamond as 2..replaced with gem stone..BUt I do not see any miss placement of the rhyme pattern if you still do let me know. Light & Love

Janani Sampath

Date: 1/11/2012 1:32:00 AM

you have a way with words. Short and deep

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/19/2011 8:38:00 PM

reminds me of Florida for some reason! Sweet!:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 11:14:00 PM

Lots of nice internal rhyming in this one, dear! Good luck in the contest.

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/16/2011 10:25:00 PM

* "My Heart Seems to Melt Amid These Beautiful * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Nette * I Don't Know * Tis Just Sooo Beautiful * Just Like Toy * My Luv, Always * Sarah." *to

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/16/2011 9:31:00 PM

I love this entry Nette.... good luck..p.d.

Kash Poet

Date: 11/16/2011 11:57:00 AM

A little gem from you Nette.Best wishes.

Tony Lane

Date: 11/16/2011 11:15:00 AM

Good luck Nette

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/16/2011 9:37:00 AM

Very very awesome write nette! "of blue night's croons, " such an awesome line!! You can't imagine what images this line brings to my imagination, and feelings so strong! Thank you for bringing this poem into my life, I greatly appreciate that!! Great work!!