Today's Weather Forecast

Clouds and fog like tarnished silver
Float weeping, mourning 'pon
The dry ground saturating it
Restoring what was gone

The Pecan Tree limbs sway dancing
With the very gentle
Breeze, and swirl with rain's soothing touch
How long will it flow "til

The clouds or system in place moves
On or they dissipates
I hope others who are needing 
Rain participate

In the joy of a gentle rain
That waters the good earth
Restoring much needed moisture
Then beautiful rainbow birth

Sponsor: Joy Wellington
Contest: Weather Forecast 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/7/2012 10:05:00 AM
Wonderful descriptive write, Sara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 10/6/2012 11:48:00 PM
Hey, congratulations, Sara!!! You did awesome.
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Date: 10/6/2012 10:55:00 AM
congratulations friend Sara for winning...its a very nice poem..cheers!! **Maria**
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Date: 10/5/2012 9:07:00 PM
Always love the appearance of the rainbow. A promise of hope and love. Thanks for your entry Sara and congrats on winning. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:27:00 PM
congrats on your win Sara
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:06:00 AM
Good morning Sara, congratulations with your awesome "Weather Forecast" poem in Joy's contest... have yourself a good day :-) Love PD
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Date: 10/5/2012 6:00:00 AM
Belated congratulations once again, I am sorry these are late I am busy packing and shopping for my holidays xx
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Date: 10/5/2012 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joy's "Weather Forecast" contest Sara. Love Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely entry Sara. I also wanted to let you know I enjoyed your poems in the Snippets anthology. Just got my copy today.
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Date: 9/28/2012 6:42:00 AM
nicely written Sara.....soup mail
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Date: 9/19/2012 2:12:00 PM
very nice. this poem makes me feel good. warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 9/19/2012 10:44:00 AM
a sure winner, my friend - I especially liked the last line
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Date: 9/18/2012 5:10:00 PM
wonderfully worded to impress this forecast filled with magnificent imagery Sara.. much luck in Joy's contest .. we r under tornado watch tonite with high winds and heavy rain and thunder .. heard Georgia had similar too..
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Date: 9/18/2012 1:45:00 PM
it's rainy season here and i can so relate with this..a quite amusing but indeed, a good write! .. go win it, sara..:) hugggs!
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Date: 9/18/2012 12:50:00 PM
A most refreshing write here sara could do with some of that sweet moisture for my tired eyes it sounds more special than normal type rain hope you are well joe..)
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Date: 9/18/2012 11:44:00 AM
We are having the rain now and I look forward to the rainbow you forecast. Best of luck. Thanks for your kind comments on my poems.
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Date: 9/18/2012 9:56:00 AM
like this, Sara, if our forecast came across like this wonderful poem reads, i'd be in raptures.
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