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To Thrive In Pristine Dawns

Though set apart, their fate is dealt Upon a solid mount of wealth Beauty mirrored by crystal lake With compass set, young roots do take Encamped by water, air and sun Forever to thrive in pristine dawns ~*~

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Rhys Matthew

Date: 12/28/2011 7:07:00 PM

Exquisite. I love a poem that asks to be (and must needs be) read again, and again. Richest imagery.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2011 10:13:00 AM

I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Annalise. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/26/2011 2:17:00 PM

Just visiting this one again Annalise...good job:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/25/2011 11:18:00 AM

Such beauty Annalise, really enjoyed this write of yours, especially with the summer's day we are having today, love wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2011 1:07:00 AM

Oh, I really like how you did yours. Pristine is surely a word that comes to mind when seeing that picture! Luv,Andrea PS. I am seeing congratulations below here. So congratulations!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2011 2:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of Moses "A Nature Verse" Annalise. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 9/19/2011 5:20:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Annalise. Many congrats : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/19/2011 12:33:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Annalise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/19/2011 1:11:00 AM

so finely written, anna...cheers and more cheers to you for the great win..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2011 1:03:00 AM

Hey, I see you won with this one too. Congratulations, Annalise.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/18/2011 11:08:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Annalise. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. xxxRalph

Don Johnson

Date: 9/18/2011 7:38:00 PM

Pristine Dawn the sun comes up, all as sweet as a cattle pup, pretty picture butter cup , to sweeten the horizon...well done ...

John Freeman

Date: 9/18/2011 4:35:00 PM

Annalise, thanks for taking the time to offer your memorable verse, the honor was mine in reading this worthy Verse entry. Agape, Moses.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2011 2:34:00 PM

CONGRATS ANNALISE ON ANOTHER GRAND WIN WITH LOVELY LINES OF POETIC ART MY FRIEND..LUV.. HAPPY SUNDAY ..

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/18/2011 12:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your 7th place finish in Johns contest.

Constance La France

Date: 9/17/2011 10:55:00 PM

This is lovely, Annalise, best of luck in the contest and thanks so much for your kind comments on my poetry~~

Joy Wellington

Date: 9/17/2011 7:17:00 PM

Ever the very discriptive poet. Pleasure to read. Love always. Jew@Smalling

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/17/2011 5:54:00 PM

we take so much for granted in nature,awesome poem, such sophistication. harry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2011 5:25:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative and descriptive work..Reads like a winner to me.Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/17/2011 3:58:00 PM

Enjoyed the rich tones, and theme you have explored here Annalise..

Jl Sadberry

Date: 9/17/2011 3:36:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “This Beautifully Brushed Painting Makes My Consider A Few Verses Spoken By God Unto Humanity & Perhaps Beyound My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Annalise! *^_^* Yet, Nothing Your Lovely Self My Dear I Find No Need to Reiterate These Words Unto Your Beauty *^_^* For I Am, Quite Certain That Your Treasures Quite of Aware of They Already *^_^* And I Can Somehow View Paradise Amid This Lakeside or Seasides View *^_^* Pristine & Thank You, for Your Lovely Visit, My Dear!” === My Love Unto Your Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper *

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2011 1:27:00 AM

NIce to see you here tonight, Annalise. I love the title of this poem and how you wrote about the pristine nature. Mine was very similar in theme!

James Peranteau

Date: 9/16/2011 11:30:00 PM

Annalise, dear poet; this write has placed me 'pon, life's quick journey.....a soul mate...hehehe...lol... it's cool...great write my friend ! Have a wonderful weekend...much love, james

Tobey Hill

Date: 9/16/2011 12:25:00 PM

nice write...TAH