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To Thrive in Pristine Dawns

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To Thrive in Pristine Dawns

Though set apart, their fate is dealt
Upon a solid mount of wealth
Beauty mirrored by crystal lake
With compass set, young roots do take
Encamped by water, air and sun
Forever to thrive in pristine dawns

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  1. Date: 12/28/2011 7:07:00 PM
    Exquisite. I love a poem that asks to be (and must needs be) read again, and again. Richest imagery.

  1. Date: 9/27/2011 10:13:00 AM
    I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Annalise. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/26/2011 2:17:00 PM
    Just visiting this one again Annalise...good job:)

  1. Date: 9/25/2011 11:18:00 AM
    Such beauty Annalise, really enjoyed this write of yours, especially with the summer's day we are having today, love wilma

  1. Date: 9/22/2011 1:07:00 AM
    Oh, I really like how you did yours. Pristine is surely a word that comes to mind when seeing that picture! Luv,Andrea PS. I am seeing congratulations below here. So congratulations!!!

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 2:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the contest of Moses "A Nature Verse" Annalise. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 5:20:00 PM
    Beautiful imagery, Annalise. Many congrats : )

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 12:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Annalise

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 1:11:00 AM
    so finely written, anna...cheers and more cheers to you for the great win..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 1:03:00 AM
    Hey, I see you won with this one too. Congratulations, Annalise.

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 11:08:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Annalise. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 7:38:00 PM
    Pristine Dawn the sun comes up, all as sweet as a cattle pup, pretty picture butter cup , to sweeten the horizon...well done ...

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 4:35:00 PM
    Annalise, thanks for taking the time to offer your memorable verse, the honor was mine in reading this worthy Verse entry. Agape, Moses.

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 2:34:00 PM

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 12:38:00 PM
    Congratulations on your 7th place finish in Johns contest.

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 10:55:00 PM
    This is lovely, Annalise, best of luck in the contest and thanks so much for your kind comments on my poetry~~

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 7:17:00 PM
    Ever the very discriptive poet. Pleasure to read. Love always. Jew@Smalling

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 5:54:00 PM
    we take so much for granted in nature,awesome poem, such sophistication. harry

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 5:25:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative and descriptive work..Reads like a winner to me.Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 3:58:00 PM
    Enjoyed the rich tones, and theme you have explored here Annalise..