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To the Writer of a Sad Poem

To the writer of a sad poem You have posted a poem today Which shows the extreme gloominess and sadness of your mind. Your writing shows that you have great potentials, But you have to give it a chance. Life may not be good right now for you, Due to prevailing darkness all around, But please give a chance as your have the powers In your writing to convert this darkness Into a bright sunshine. My good wishes and prayer that you come out From this darkness without eliminating life Which is not yours but a gift of God. Ravindra Kanpur India 17th January 2010 Note: These lines were written on 16th Jan 2010 when I saw a poem while posting my own poem on the board In the name of Suicide. It appears to me that the writer of this poem is in utter depression and perhaps my words may sooth her a little. After completing my comments which is still on that poem Suicide I found that these comments could be posted as a Poem also and that is how this poem came into existence. I have no idea whether the writer of Suicide has come out of her deep depression or not? As since then there is no new posting from that poet on the board. May God give her strength and courage and peace. Ravindra rechecked on 29th Jan. 2010

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Date: 1/19/2010 8:54:00 AM
this is a nice poem and i like the darker poetry but i am not sad. good write!
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Date: 1/18/2010 12:00:00 PM
Profound message you send, it seemed you were writing just for me and how did you know I was in darkness? Thanks for the encouraging words..
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Date: 1/17/2010 5:40:00 PM
Fine encouraging words! Hope the spring brings hope and happiness to you and yours. Its been a long cold winter here in NYC. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/17/2010 11:14:00 AM
What an encouraging and inspirational poem. Your faith shines through this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 1/17/2010 8:05:00 AM
Such compassion and understanding....your words show your heart, Ravindra. Everyone can benefit by your uplifting poem. ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/17/2010 8:02:00 AM
Ravindra, Your love and concern for a fellow poet shows great compassion through this loving, well written poem. I join you in prayer to the life-giver that sadness and dark days will flee forever and free her soul to enjoy happiness. (And thank you for commenting on my poems.) Lovingly, Dane PS As per your request, "The Sensual Side of Passion" has been written and posted. Smiles.
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