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To Not Breathe Pain and Die

The rain that reached the rural of my roof Collapsed through ceilings cracked, a crying child Sometimes I cry myself. A man I mourn The day that I will die of deaths disease In tale I tease my thoughts to take back time When age was young, a yearling of a youth But brother, I must battle this blind pain As he that walked with faith on waters will

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/1/2011 7:36:00 PM
YOu make yourself sound a bit old in this one, Johnny. YOu are still middle aged, aren't you? It is fascinating to me to find out how many poets here are way up there in years!!(and I'm sure getting there myself. haha)
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Date: 6/29/2011 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations Johnny on your win in the "Any Form -Theme" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 7:46:00 AM
Congrats Johnny on your super win in Brian's contest with this excellent entry luv... enjoy another wow moment ...
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:45:00 AM
Oie, would scare the chicken dickens out of anyone, Johnny!! A memorable moment that only He, who "walked with faith on waters will" can subdue. Strange that these times can adhere to our here and now. Oh, wishing you and yours the best! Love, Mikki
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Date: 6/23/2011 1:49:00 PM
Hi there thanks for the entry, verse 1 is the weakest try to make it a bit more coherant as a whole..you have time to work more on this.. and list the form as 1 of the 3. Light & Love
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:06:00 AM
Nice write!
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Book: Shattered Sighs