To My Erudite Lover

You are an erudite in disguise
dawn to dusk I dive in your blue eyes
You inspire even the legends 
Breaking the rules of the  established trends 
Carving a niche, With your poetic weave 
I fall for your truism, the intense criticism
Cannot conceal your Talent; for you are the gifted one 
In due course of time all platonic art will fade away 
The charm in your poetry would rise beyond the horizon of perfection !
Years , decades and the centuries  will sing of your glory 
human life is uncertain but your verses shall be chanted  by rivers and mountains 
I shall sleep with your immortal soul but Will you think of my soul ?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/19/2012 9:24:00 AM
awesome red, where are you? harry
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Date: 1/16/2012 6:23:00 AM
Wow - Amazing!
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Date: 9/10/2011 6:46:00 PM
May your verses be repeated in the gleam of the stars....while making love to celestial bodies.
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Date: 5/29/2011 8:57:00 PM
a great write, well worded, niecely done. thank you for commenting on Breezes on the Lake
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Date: 5/29/2011 8:40:00 PM
Very mystical work! Keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/29/2011 4:51:00 PM
Good one..Enjoyed reading this eve..The earth has its own poetry..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work "Generic Bleach"...Sara
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Date: 5/29/2011 4:02:00 PM
Brilliant expressions poetic write, ending in a philosophic way, smriti
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Date: 5/29/2011 3:29:00 PM
wow! your lover must have the perfect subjects for you... deep blue like the sea... the ending was thoughtful,, well written, and erudite in its love ending,.. enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/29/2011 2:42:00 PM
* “How Can True Beauty Ever Escape * The Muse & Eyes & Dreams of Others * My Dear Precious & Beautiful Smriti. * Noticed Your Lovely Name At A Very Beautiful Ladies Poe Com Box * Wished to Pay A Visit * Glad I Did For I Enjoyed This Glimpse of Your Sweeetened Passion & Talent. * Great Verse * Hugs & Kissses * Kisssses & Hugs * Sarah” *
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Date: 5/29/2011 2:39:00 PM
I suppose this is not about me because I am a truck driver and had to look up the word erudite in my dictionary.... (must be a lucky guy) Can I think about your soul anyway...LOL
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Date: 5/29/2011 2:14:00 PM
I came back to give you 7/7 Smiles :)
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Date: 5/29/2011 2:13:00 PM
This pen is simply beautiful such emotion :@)
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