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To My Children

To My Children

Your teeth are green.
Your hot breath reeks.
Your room is a mess.
Your clothing stinks.
Your voice is loud.
Your ears are deaf.
I am your maid
and personal chef.
I'm proud of you
and all your traits
Cause I'm the one
Who made you great.

Brenda Atry

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  1. Date: 10/4/2012 1:01:00 PM
    The ultimate coach, the ageless avenger - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 11/24/2011 10:52:00 AM
    am not actually a mother but i can relate.truthfully written and quite funny.

  1. Date: 11/23/2011 10:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Brenda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 5:24:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Brenda

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 4:37:00 AM
    Amusing and oh-so-true write!

  1. Date: 4/13/2011 8:58:00 PM
    LOL- love it. I was expecting something mushy and gushy and hallmark-y, but this, this is sooooooooo much better. Thanks for the laugh! Cyndi