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To Make the Earth a Better Place

Angels descending bring from above spreading their wings in night sky echos of mercy, whispers of love on earth these things are running dry. Spreading their wings in night sky holding flowers of love and peace on earth these things are running dry they are coming to replenish. Holding flowers of love and peace with a smile of divine grace they are coming to replenish things that'll make earth a better place. With a smile of divine grace welcome all in your sacred heart things that'll make earth a better place and other things for a fresh new start. Welcome all in your sacred heart echos of mercy ,whispers of love and other things for a fresh new start angel's descending bring from above. © kashinath karmakar 2012 =============000============= Placement: 2nd;(Feb. 2012) Contest:~Fallen Angel~ Sponsor:Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver

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  1. Date: 2/21/2012 5:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in ~Tracie's~ "Fallen Angel" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 11:51:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Kash! :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:47:00 PM
    Hey I was so right on this one when I said she would love it. AWESOME,you got another top spot. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 5:44:00 PM
    Excellent use of the form. Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 3:21:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Kash,very impressive poem you have here. :o)

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 2:56:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 1:18:00 PM
    Congrats Kash on your 1st place win, Amazing poem, love,vie

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 10:50:00 AM
    Congrats on your great win! I love the theme of hope and new beginnings. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 10:45:00 AM
    Kash, wonderful poem. Congrats on winning 2nd place in Tracie's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 8:33:00 AM
    Again, a beautiful piece by you...this is a peaceful and comforting pantoum, that makes one feel watched over, as if everything will be restored and turned right once again. congratulations, Kash!

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 7:36:00 AM
    Such an honor to share the place, Kash! Congratulations :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:59:00 AM
    Another mesmerizing write and well deserved win, Kash. Now write about a political angel...ha ha. just kidding. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:54:00 AM
    congrats Kash on a fantastic win for these elegant and emphatic words luv..

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 5:56:00 AM
    Congratulations kash a smashing write xx

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 5:01:00 AM
    VERY NICE. congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 2/15/2012 2:39:00 PM
    a very interesting take on the theme, Kash. I honestly don't have a clue yet if I can or will do a fallen angel poem. You are so good with pantoum, I think Tracie is going to fall in love with this. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/15/2012 11:19:00 AM
    such an enlightening melody of rebirth, kashi.. love the positive karma here, whooo!..:) my winning choice..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 8:13:00 PM
    You showcase this form with pure grace, Kash. I loved what you created from the picture. Tracie will be completely delighted. Can't wait to see how you fare in this contest. Happy Valentine's Day to the official romance poet (not political poet) of the Poetry Soup!ha ha. Gwendolen ps..hope Span did well on his finals..A piece of chocolate cake to celebrate the conclusion of testing. :)

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 9:21:00 AM
    Looks like a fine example of a pantoum poem. Good writing Kash.

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 8:09:00 AM
    I love your every stanza, Kash. And how you played with those words.. Woohh!!! :)