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To Love In Weakness Or Grow Strong

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To Love In Weakness Or Grow Strong

In those tender hours before the dawn
I cry that I'm his tragic pawn.
He shreds my senses into tatters
then squashes all the hope that matters.

Yet I feel such a magical love
from him like he's sent from above.
My heartstrings play each song for him.
He fills my soul right to the brim.

Now I have made my tough decision.
He'll find me gone when he has risen.
Single and strong is what I'll be.
I grabbed the reins-set myself free!

written 1/16/2014
for contest Three or More Stanzas and Thoughts On Same Idea"

P>S> This is not my real life LOL !!

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  1. Date: 1/18/2014 3:10:00 PM
    Deb, excellent twist at the end and good emotion. Good contrast between the stanzas. Congratulations on your win. Thanks much for entering my contest.

  1. Date: 1/18/2014 12:06:00 PM
    Yahoo for you.........the voice of a strong woman, free to be you !!! Loved it....great entry and subject!!

  1. Date: 1/18/2014 9:29:00 AM
    very beautifully penned eileen

  1. Date: 1/18/2014 8:12:00 AM
    Good for you, Deb. Ice the stud. daver

  1. Date: 1/18/2014 4:34:00 AM
    lol Deb the tenderness seeps through you have a romantic heart love this Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/17/2014 9:55:00 PM
    It takes great courage to stand up for oneself, but it is necessary if we are truly to be happy some day, lovely poem penned, Deb, xxx

  1. Date: 1/17/2014 9:41:00 PM
    I great poem about finding strength to do something you should but don't want to. I like the "P.S." So many people assume our poems are about us. Most of mine are made up situations.

  1. Date: 1/17/2014 6:24:00 AM
    I really enjoyed reading this awesome write here this morning my friend! I especially liked the key line of the poem, "Single and strong is what I'll be." that line created the final blow to your poem, as 'you' completed your goal! What a fantastic piece, such a grand poem! Great Work!!