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To Hell and Back Because of You

The endless drone of your mindless tone. I just wanted to yank you through the phone. I didn't sign up for a bubble headed bimbo. It feels like my life is just in limbo. The end can't come soon enough for me. Your driving me crazy, can't you see? I see you there in your red bandana. Black Magic Woman playing by Santana. I can't help but go under your spell. I love you so much, can't you tell? If you leave me now, I will just fall apart. Your sweet smile goes straight to my heart. For p.d.'s to hell and back contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/7/2019 10:32:00 AM
Is this for you know who??I managed to track down an oldie of yours I had not seen yet. GREAT rhyming poetry , Leslie.
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Robert Johnson
Date: 9/7/2019 11:05:00 AM
Wow, are you an archeologist Andrea? :) lol You're really digging up some old bones here. :) I guess it's about the one before if you're aware of who that is. Although it's a bit obscure as to any real characteristic of her. Thanks though. :) <3
Date: 8/12/2012 8:33:00 AM
Was the trip worth it Robert? Sometimes the heart leads us to places that make the struggle worthwhile. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 8/9/2012 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "To Hell And Back" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:05:00 PM
Love it ,,,,, I see why you won ;} thank you for reading both my echoes poems ;}
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Date: 8/6/2012 8:37:00 AM
Beautifully composed, Robert, congrats on the win:) Jag
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Date: 8/5/2012 1:24:00 PM
Robert congrats on your win, love it...David
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win Robert
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Date: 8/4/2012 8:34:00 PM
ROBERT :-) , this has been my favorite contest out of all the ones I have sponsored this year.. Congratulations and thank you for the double journey... good night... XOX~ PD
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Date: 7/31/2012 9:05:00 AM
Wow !! Powerful poem....it just knocks the socks off of you. I think you did well with the theme...Good Luck with the contest. It's a winner to me !!
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