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To Give You My All

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Below is the poem entitled To Give You My All which was written by poet Laura Breidenthal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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To Give You My All

Where on earth have you fled to? I never wanted to just watch you leave Performing the abortion of abandonment Perhaps I was a disappointment for letting you go Flooded with ignorance, I just didn’t know I want to always be there for you To shine down upon your unseen, inner glow To see you smile with your brand new life And to share in the happiness of an open eye I simply do not know where you are Or what you are feeling right now But I should like to be your journey’s end A settlement of tranquility, yet arduous color Open up your demonizing doors I will give you more and more and more Until I have nothing left to give But myself My entire essence and being You deserve to see what I am seeing You deserve what is fairly yours And I am sorry for the absence I just didn’t know How to care for such a delicate masterpiece How to maintain a beautiful thing I never know what to say To bring you to peace Maybe I shall say nothing and fall To give you my all

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  1. Date: 10/3/2012 8:28:00 AM
    just stoped buy to say hi tahnk you again for your comments nothing wrong with sarcasium the poem was intened as a joke i like a lot of your work its nice that you can realate to xx davidscott

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 10:02:00 AM
    wicked look forward top reading more of your writes xx davidscott

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 12:52:00 PM
    A disapointment for letting me go. You said no one to many times. What was the point in watching me beg? When all your humiliations I have feed. You killed hope and refuse to beg. Never asking once to revive the dead.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 11:31:00 PM
    This is real selfless devotion so to gain everything for oneself as a result - a beautiful virtue here, of giving everything in order to gain all Laura - this expression of honesty is replete with suffering, and hope too - "abortion of abandonment - settlement of tranquility..." you indeed set the standard high my friend - thank you - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 12:59:00 AM
    This is a really interesting poem. I really like it. :)

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 9/6/2012 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thankies, Becca! <3
  1. Date: 9/6/2012 12:54:00 AM
    I'd like you to tell me about this poem...What it means,is it real,do you feel it? That kinda stuff.. :o)

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 9/6/2012 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Haha. Well, it's hard to really explain. I might soupmail you sometime and explain if you so wish. Just send me a note and I'll try my best to explain what I can ^^
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 2:27:00 AM
    A very good poem Laura, a lot of emotions. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)