To All the Women : Whose Your Daddy?

Why do you use sex as a control weapon?
You pretend to not know that we need it.
The monster must be alleviated, released. 
We get sex when we get a promotion, 
or our birthday or when we buy you a gift.
What greed is that?
Can you even have a real ******? Or faking it?
We know you have one when you do our best friend! 
You ignore that in all of history we have owned you!
And now you are free, free to use it to control us.
And when we cheat, you feel so betrayed.
Anger that we were stupid enough 
To commit to you for life,
When we didn’t know that you were so ungiving,
To care about our sexual needs. 
You expect us to control it, are you stupid? Naïve?
Men are molesting children: their own children, because of women like you!
I know, because most of the women I have dated were abused by their own fathers.
The best we could hope for is that they only cheat with another adult.
Why are these women staying with men that abused their own daughters?
This has got to STOP.
These lies must STOP.
Cutting our foreskin does not stop us from masturbating, or needing!
Grahame Crackers are useless. Other men, Craigslist, Bathrooms, YMCA!
Men are becoming gay, roleplaying the fantasies of their oppressed mothers. 
Spank me daddy! Whose your daddy? Make me do it!
We men are having a hard time transitioning into the freedoms you have!
Look at history or the rural Muslims killing their wives or the Africans cutting off the ********. 
This issue is tearing humanity apart! 
All the divorces, are because of you not servicing your man. 
He would never hurt you or leave you if he was satisfied sexually! 
This means you have to exercise and stay fit for him to be proud of his mate! 
So if you gain weight and not care for his pride:  You are the abuser!
Milk your husbands, or they will find someone else too. 
All because you are so self-centered, lazy, and greedy for power.
So whose your daddy?  I AM,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 4/25/2011 7:54:00 AM
I love the way this weaves across the boundaries of truth and consequences in real life and presses the panic buttons of so much discord. For any honest reader, it offers to provoke enough hatred or guilt to cause a moment of reflection and sometimes, a moment is all it takes to find understanding of what it really means to be human. Good shredding Michael!
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Date: 1/29/2010 9:49:00 PM
I meant i could shred "men" just as easily But i could shred me too, i think i will write that one now, that sounds fun....
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Date: 1/29/2010 9:48:00 PM
I could shred me just as easily, i just havent got to them yet. But the inspiration is coming.
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Date: 1/29/2010 6:05:00 PM
Hey Michael, I am speechless! This is really "shock and awe" writing, for real. You left a comment on my "Obligatory Liaison" I mistkenly sent Gerard Keogh the Soup Mail intended for you. My Soup mail sometimes doesn't work so this is just to let you know, you are so wrong, buddy. There're so man 3-minute men out there! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/29/2010 1:33:00 PM
Sometimes its the other way round,men dont please their women,thinking that women are objects ,a thing used to amuze, thinking women have no brains, but some women are lucky enough to have beauty and brains,and wont be weak or controlled by any man..interesting to read...
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Date: 1/29/2010 10:16:00 AM
This is my most hard core expressionism yet. Remember i write for shock value or to evoke emotion. I can not say i agree with my own script.
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