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To a Secret Love

In my heart I've always loved you Always thought you good and kind Though I know you do not know me Know you're always on my mind Nights of darkness pass unbroken By your smile and gentle ways How I wish that you were present Here beside me all my days Light or darkness, rain or shadow Thoughts of you are light to me Now I pray that as you read this Thoughts of me would kindly be I would be your slave forever Just to bring a smile or two Have you walking life beside me All your blest commands to do How I hope that you will greet me Pray you'll see my desp'rate case Should you not, my heart would founder Longing for your smiling face About this poem: It is trochaic, meaning that it starts with a stressed syllable and alternates between a stressed and unstressed the whole way through. The syllable count is 8.7.8.7. Although I wrote this from the viewpoint of a man, it could be read either way.

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Date: 6/12/2013 9:11:00 PM
Isaiah, I enjoyed reading this sweet romantic poem! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/10/2013 1:56:00 PM
Isaiah........your poem is very sweet........... congrats!!! SKAT
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Date: 5/25/2013 4:24:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem.
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Date: 5/24/2013 6:59:00 PM
Isaiah congratulations on your trochaic poem. This is a well deserve win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/24/2013 3:53:00 PM
Wonderful love story! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 5/24/2013 1:38:00 PM
Isaiah, congratulations with your winning poem, in the "Incurable Romantic" contest... ~xox* Linda
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Date: 5/23/2013 6:12:00 PM
This is just a wonderful piece of work Isaiah! Kim
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Date: 4/23/2013 12:30:00 PM
ok wow I have only read few of your poems, but I love them sooooo much, you are such a great poet, I would love to get advice from you to make me better, you seen like such a romantic type
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Date: 2/2/2013 6:33:00 PM
wow, this is beautiful Isaiah! Love it!
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Date: 1/31/2013 4:35:00 PM
Isalah congrats on your win. A beautiful write. Well done. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/29/2013 8:28:00 AM
HmmTo answer your question..I might be having a Valentine fever but Gee look above..We got a romantic..And its Valentine flu.Hope its not epedemic :).Very beautiful ;-)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/29/2013 8:30:00 AM
I forgot to congratulste you oops
Date: 1/28/2013 3:25:00 PM
So romantic! I know many a gal who would kill to receive a love poem like this ;) Congrats on your win! And in response to your comment earlier today - I definitely share your love of the English language, especially older English. Did you study Literature in school - or History perhaps? I majored in English Literature and minored in Greek History. I'm a bit of a geek that way :)
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Date: 1/27/2013 12:52:00 PM
congratulations on your win...this really is great....
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Date: 1/26/2013 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear friend, Isiah! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 1/26/2013 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this impressive entry!
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Date: 1/26/2013 4:49:00 PM
Isaiah... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA
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Date: 1/26/2013 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Isaiah! Beautifully written! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/26/2013 10:39:00 AM
Congrad's on your win in this contest, it wasn't an easy challenge! Light & Love
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Date: 1/26/2013 8:31:00 AM
Just fantastic, you are a craftsman, excellent work. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/19/2013 9:15:00 AM
I never tried the trochaic style..maybe i will in the near future..tnks for the tip..bravo
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Date: 1/15/2013 6:14:00 PM
you've done a wonderful job with the rhythm and the rhymes and have created a lovely poem!
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