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skidding tires- crying at her funeral Entry in the Broken Monoku contest

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Date: 5/18/2010 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Joe. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/12/2010 3:31:00 AM
Joe, Excellent writing! Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J
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Date: 5/11/2010 1:25:00 PM
COngrats on your 2nd Place win, Joe!! Very nice Monoku....later, Jimmy
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Date: 5/8/2010 8:13:00 PM
Congrats on the win
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Date: 5/6/2010 12:54:00 AM
Says it all Joe...congratulations on your success in the contest...Margaret
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Date: 5/5/2010 3:13:00 PM
well, looky there, Joe, Mr. Newbie, you got a number two spot!!! It all comes in due time. Congratulations to you, and thanks so much for commenting to my blog! andrea
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Date: 5/5/2010 8:06:00 AM
I really liked this poem the first time I read it. Powerful thought captured in just six words. Congratulations on placing second in Brian's contest. Enjoy your big success. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 5/5/2010 7:57:00 AM
Good work. congratulations on your 2nd. Love, joyce
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Date: 5/5/2010 7:41:00 AM
One of the best for sure!! Great job, Joe!! Congratulations on your win!!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/5/2010 5:59:00 AM
Congrats on the win
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Date: 5/5/2010 4:58:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your winning poem in the Broken Monoku contest with this one I already knew from my previous read would win ... enjoy my friend ...your poetry portfolio is growing quickly with so many wins... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/5/2010 4:50:00 AM
A whole story in this one monoku, Joe. Congratulations to you. great job! -Robert
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Date: 5/1/2010 1:41:00 PM
Interesting analogy with a chilling message. Good luck in the contest. Enjoy your weekend. Karen
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Date: 5/1/2010 12:46:00 PM
Good luck Joe with this great Monoku .. I think u also need to put your initials along with the word Title in Brian's guidelines ... just a little notice for u ...some sponsors are sticklers about their guidelines and rules... luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/1/2010 7:18:00 AM
Hi Joe, I like your monoku... my monoku is not written yet, I am really WORKING on it... check back later... love constance
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Date: 5/1/2010 6:59:00 AM
Wow...this gives one a lot to think about!
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Date: 5/1/2010 6:49:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Joe.Rgds Brian
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