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Tired But Spunky

These old feet of mine, such an engineering masterpiece Bravely holding up this great body of work with little complaint Down to earth and tired, but sporting spunky red nail polish Barbara Gorelick for the Feet contest. 1/28/12

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/9/2012 9:00:00 PM

My LOVE Barbara, Congratulations on YOUR Beautiful ( like YOU ) Win in Nette's Contest " ON YOUR FEET " I find Sijo a hard Form to Write ,LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER, BARBARA JEAN my ETERNITY YOURS...Harry

Kash Poet

Date: 2/2/2012 3:24:00 AM

Enjoyed this beautiful Sijo.Congrats Barbara on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/2/2012 2:48:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2012 3:58:00 PM

This is really cool how you personified the feet. GREAT title for it too, Barbara. It's one of my favorites. Luv, Andrea

Bob Quigley

Date: 2/1/2012 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Barbara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2012 9:44:00 AM

congrats BG on a wonderful win for this delightful piece.. am sporting red these days too ..vibrantcy rocks..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/1/2012 5:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "On Your Feet" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/29/2012 1:17:00 PM

What wonderful poetry you all are sharing today. I enjoyed reading yours Barbara. Hope the coming week finds you in good health and your life full of joy and inspiration. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/29/2012 9:56:00 AM

Amazing what those poor feet must go through....and yet we still expect them to look pretty!! Yep, nail polish to the rescue!! Cute one!

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/28/2012 11:19:00 PM

Barbara, this looks like a very good sijo poem. All three lines are very descriptive.