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Tiptoe Through the Warming

The toes of Michelangelo's David are musculinely strong, second toe a touch longer than the big toe as befits a gifted man. This is how I walk the earth - in Michelangelo's toes, gripping the soil just hard enough to keep it steadily waltzing around the sun in its Galilean galleon. My toes tread carefully among the growing leaves of grass and upward-glancing, jogging centipedes; carefully on this oblate earth with all our growing growing woes to keep my footprint small, I walk on my toes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/25/2008 10:03:00 PM
Hello Christie - it's very nice of you to comment so warmly on my poem. Thanks! :) I will keep posting, but will not flood the site, it can become boring to other readers, I imagine. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 11/24/2008 9:56:00 PM
Hello Keith - Thanks for all these luxuriant words of praise! I hope the poem will do its microscopic bit to make us all more and more aware of the importance of maintaining our environment. - Enjoy :)
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Date: 11/24/2008 9:19:00 PM
Unique and compelling! Marvelous phrasing and masterful imagery... well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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