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Tipsy Turvy Nights

Toddling
stumbling
fumbling
tumbling
are some nights,like toddling stumbling child,
tipsy turvy fumbling tumbling mind.






© kashinath karmakar(17th August 2011)
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Placement:7th;(August 2011)

Contest:Tyburn

Sponsor:Dr.Ram Mehta

Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2011

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/24/2011 11:05:00 PM I'm getting off here an hour late. BROTHER!! Anyway, biblical means from the bible. That poem you liked of mine, is using English the way it appears in the Bible(well I hope I did it right) goodnight now. See ya tomorrow, Kash! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/8/2011 9:06:00 AM Stopping by your excellent poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine Kasinath. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/1/2011 1:07:00 AM wow! , Truly Enjoyed reading your words tonight. Thank you for sharing your poem, have your self blessed day,..LINDA Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 8/26/2011 4:31:00 PM LOL Many congrats on your wins, Kash : ) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/26/2011 7:57:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tyburn" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/25/2011 11:28:00 PM Congrats Kash on your winning poem in Tyburn contest.. nice choice of words luv.. Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 8/25/2011 11:15:00 PM Kash, Are u thinking what I am thinking? lol. Format is perrrrrrrfect! I am so proud of u for mastering this form, Kash. Thanks for your Soup-er Support! My daughter Mika enjoyed this write also. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/25/2011 11:15:00 PM Big congratulations on this drinking man's tyburn!! Luv, Andrea (I can really see it now!!) Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 8/25/2011 9:32:00 PM Kashinath, Nice words choice for rhymes. Quite good, a worthy poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/25/2011 6:06:00 PM Congratulations on the win in my contest,kashinath Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 8/19/2011 10:45:00 PM I stand corrected, Kash! This poem might not win bc when I read it...the.......rooom.....is.....spinning.....alll....around!!! ha ha. Wonderful. Now, follow the advice in my tyburn. Don't text and drive....then with your tyburn....don't drink and write!!! ha ha. Bye Bud! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 8/19/2011 2:49:00 PM hehe, watch out now.. Don't get too tipsy ;) enjoyed this Kash, good luck for Dr. Ram's contest ;) Wilma Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/19/2011 2:33:00 PM Yes, I've had nights like this, Kash! Great tyburn for Dr. Ram's contest. Soup mail coming. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 8/19/2011 1:58:00 PM Are you headed to the bathroom Kashi? Hope you made it my dear. Love the verse, it takes me there too! Love, Elizabeth Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/19/2011 12:07:00 AM more than a few nights like this Kash.. excellent choices for your entry luv.. good luck.. do u know my husband? haha..sounds a lot like Ron.. oh ..only kidding..luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/18/2011 10:21:00 PM Just seeing this one again, it's so cute. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/18/2011 8:37:00 AM Interesting one..Leaves one with questions..Enjoyed reading this morning..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my simple work..I enjoyed writing that one...Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/17/2011 11:22:00 PM Hey, Kash, this is nice. Are you describing your own child here? They can sure be this way!! Hey, did you notice they are now getting rid of our past poetry? ONly the last 200 can be found. It makes me annoyed because many poets here, I have read their last 200 poems and I enjoyed going way back in their pages to see poems to comment on!! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/17/2011 8:25:00 PM Thanks for the entry, kashinath Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/17/2011 6:46:00 PM Kash, You write in form poetry so well. Thank you for your comments. (Soupmail) Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/17/2011 6:34:00 PM really child-like with descriptive artwrids, kashi... winning wishes! :) huggs Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 8/17/2011 5:38:00 PM Hi Kash.....reading,,,,liking.....this tyburn of yours! Nice job. What a unique form for a lot of us. When are u gonna sponsor your first contest? Gwendolen Login to Reply

Johnny Sumler Date: 8/17/2011 3:55:00 PM Beautiful title with a wonderful approach to this classic form. A great entry k.k. Login to Reply