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Tiny Words

tiny words 'went to the gas station and opened my mouth filled my stomach with gasoline lit a match and swallowed it in burned myself smoked with fire i spread like charcoal smeared in a kid's hand stenched and charred black i spread to the pristine clouds deploring the blue vault like a black shiitake flower suffocating lungs with a dire myth then went to the ocean and devoted myself to no resistance and drowned ....... 'cut my lips with sharp visceral shale and waited for the sharks to gnaw my weightless lips and useless mouth .......... while the rest of me traveled in the bellies of fish .............. ...................... ....................... ....................... fed by tiny words . ........................

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Date: 1/23/2012 11:12:00 AM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 1/11/2012 1:34:00 PM
Wow. this is such a unique read for me-- I really enjoyed your thoughts you put in here, ernest! and the last line, really got to me, tiny words with impact indeed! Congrats!
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Date: 1/11/2012 9:18:00 AM
Ernest, a beautiful poem friend, "Congratulations" on a worthy poem honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/11/2012 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in the Poetrysoup International Contest for August 2011 Ernest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 2:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win x
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Date: 1/10/2012 9:07:00 PM
This is really cool. I loved reading it. Congratulations on your honored win!
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Date: 1/4/2012 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Ernest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2011 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Ernest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2011 4:39:00 PM
What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Ernest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2011 10:55:00 AM
...tiny words could have spoken, if only a tiny chance was given! I feel you in this wonderfully crafted poem, Ernest! Welcome to the Soupers' World! I am looking forward to hearing more of your words--tiny or huge!
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:43:00 PM
Creative and interesting expressions, earnest
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:01:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words of creative poetry as this gem with luv..
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Date: 7/8/2011 4:14:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ernest. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. I must say this poem was very different. Love and blessing always, Carol
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