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Below is the poem entitled Tiny which was written by poet Sara Kendrick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A tiny dark chamber With small pulsating mass Blood regurgitating Scary place A broken heart
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  1. Date: 10/28/2012 10:57:00 AM
    Wonderful poem of broken heart keeps alive. Nicely done. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 12:45:00 AM
    great imagination from you in this Tanka Sara.Beautifully penned.Best wishes.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 10:28:00 AM
    Hi Sara words of wisdom indeed, enjoyed this Tanka, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:38:00 AM
    Liked it, on the dark side for you. Nice Tanka

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:33:00 AM
    Dear Sara - Brings tears to my eyes this jammed packed piece of raw emotion. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:23:00 PM
    I love this! You are a very talented poet

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 3:24:00 PM
    wow, Sara, this is profound, if for the contest, wow, i know where this would place in mine

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 2:39:00 PM
    A great physical description as well, Sara!!

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 12:04:00 PM
    I love this poem, too.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 10:13:00 AM
    I love your poem, Sara! Your writing is splendid. I do think, though, the title doesn't do it justice. I don't feel it is strong enough.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 9:54:00 AM
    wonderful imagery, sara... emotions are chaotic but well defined.. on to the winners' list!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:00:00 AM
    Wow, I see the subtle difference between your two 'Heart' poems, one a Tanka, the other a Gogyoka! I think I really enjoyed this one better as you weren't confined to a syllable count to keep you so restricted! This is a great and wondrous write, I really enjoyed reading it this morning! What a delightful piece, Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 7:04:00 AM
    Simple yet visually complex. Good job Rick