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Time's Up

time slips through
your fingers like
grains of sand

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  1. Date: 10/23/2008 8:33:00 AM
    is'nt that the truth. it goes way too fast these days.

  1. Date: 10/6/2008 6:22:00 AM
    D-nyce the words of this haiku ring so very true, time stands still for no man, woman or child...So we had beter make good use of the time that we have. Thank you for sharing these pearls of wisdom :-) God's Love, Always, Adell

  1. Date: 10/3/2008 3:30:00 PM
    Such an intrinsic truth in this poem. Well done. Love Heidie

  1. Date: 10/3/2008 2:55:00 PM
    Time is leaving me so quickly..never enough time to get it all done.

  1. Date: 10/3/2008 2:11:00 PM
    I agree time goes by so fast and leaves our head spinning. a great write.

  1. Date: 10/2/2008 11:58:00 PM
    Like I said to Janice poem on time, live each day like it was your last. Nice write Deneen so few words so effective. blessings Michael

  1. Date: 10/2/2008 11:50:00 PM
    Never to return D-nyce.Nice work & thanks for your welcome comments.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 10/2/2008 7:12:00 PM
    Just like an hour glass ... smile ... great use of Haiku here Deneen. Some times the simplest form says the most!

  1. Date: 10/2/2008 6:03:00 PM
    The funny thing about time is I spent most of my life waiting on a parole date as it ticked by so slow and now I look back and it just flew right by - Great poem Deneen - God Bless

  1. Date: 10/2/2008 3:59:00 PM
    No doubt about it. Time is so fleeting. Enjoy every moment while we can. Another great title, too! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 10/2/2008 3:07:00 PM
    Yes indeed...It is very true and well-known...Times plays between our fingers...and all is ephemeral, except Value:) Thank you for sharing, TYOne, Farah