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Time Sequence

Time Sequence (5 seconds to start - 2 minutes to complete) 

There’s a time sequence that sweeps you away
Where are you going? No, when are you going
Is the question
That begs to be answered

This marking of the seconds
Is a tick tocking clocking
Of opportunity slipping
Sideways into tomorrow

Can you see it?
It’s the voice of unreason
Can you hear it?
It’s the image of a lost adventurer
Putting his oar to the water

Gone in the rise and fall of the waves
Lost in the tides of the sea
What comes tomorrow?
Who will answer me?

Written For Matt Caliri's "Write Now" Challenge" -

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  1. Date: 8/21/2009 1:19:00 AM
    Corrine,thank you for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 8/15/2009 12:52:00 PM
    You got the chap book ....wonderful...hope you like it. I'm flattered that you'd want to read my stuff, dear friend. BIG LOVE, daver

  1. Date: 8/15/2009 9:10:00 AM
    Hi, trying to send you the chap book but there is some sort of a block set up. I do not want to have to mail the book - too expensive! No sweat. I send big love and am very patient.Answer when you get time. daver

  1. Date: 8/14/2009 5:41:00 AM
    Hi, Corinne...sorry to be so long getting back to you. about the chap book...what I need is your email address so I can send the book on line. My email address is - home address is- David R. Austin, 2211 N Bond, Saginaw MI, 48602.

  1. Date: 8/14/2009 1:09:00 AM
    Best wishes with this one Corrine.Thank you for your blog comments today.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 1:40:00 PM
    Hi, mysterious Corinne. Like your time riddle. I'm back, at least partially. Sending mucho love, daver

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 10:23:00 AM
    Interesting. Sara

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 10:02:00 AM
    wow! really 2 minutes! this is a great free writing flow! good luck!

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 9:50:00 AM
    I see a winner in this one Corinne. Exceptional write. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 9:44:00 AM
    Excellent! How did you do it? Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 9:27:00 AM
    Wow, Corinne, what an amazing 2-minute verse! Your thoughts are so deep and that image of the "lost adventurer putting his oar to the water" is compelling. Life's journey! Great work! Love, Carolyn