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Time Moves On

When sun turned to gold We sipped at our cold Sauternes. Perfectly controlled, Hand in hand we strolled Through ferns. So Fortune’s wheel turns And the flame that burns So hot, To ash it returns. In the end one learns, So what? the form is Virelai Anciens ( 2 lines of five syllables followed by one line of 2. Repeated to make a 6 line stanza with a rhyme scheme of AAB AAB, BBC BBC,) but does not feature in poetrysoup lists

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Date: 10/19/2008 4:33:00 AM
Maggie I loved this poem especially the last line - Interesting form and a great job - God Bless
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Date: 10/18/2008 4:44:00 PM
This is a lovely poem, and interesting form. I will have to give it a try sometime...you have caught my attention with your nice write! ~ Carrie
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