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Time is no Barrier

Time is no Barrier

On high, across the land and out to sea
The mist of time will stay, and cast a veil
Your love and thoughts alone, will drift to me
No walls or words will stop, or help prevail
To keep our love apart, so they shall see
The up's and down's of life and death, we sail

A chance meeting as eyes did gaze, passion!
From morn till night, surpassed by lies so vile
Poisonous  words spoken quite violently
Others whisper advice, to wait awhile
To those we say, although, reluctantly
Alone in hand we’ll walk along the aisle.

In time, we hope we will instil, no doubt
To those who care, is that, our love’s devout.

Iambic Pentameter

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  1. Date: 2/9/2012 10:18:00 PM
    oh, and I take it this won? Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 10:17:00 PM
    the first stanza was perfectly metered, Allan. I love your message of the endurance of love with all its ups and downs!!

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 11:45:00 AM
    Great poem Allan really enjoyed reading it

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 8:20:00 AM
    Congratulations to you on your win in Debbie Guzzi 's "Change for the Meter" contest Allen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 8:03:00 AM
    Beautiful poem Allan.Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 2:49:00 PM
    Enjoyed this love-worthy write Allan, and well done on the win...)

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 12:25:00 PM
    Congratulations Allan x

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 11:47:00 AM
    Lovely poem! Congratulations for your win in Debbie's contest! hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 11:07:00 AM
    Wonderful meter and true content. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 10:40:00 AM
    Allan congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 8:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Allan

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 7:41:00 AM

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 2:48:00 PM
    so far I can't see ANY meter mistakes keep on trucking! & submit when ready..Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 1:54:00 PM
    Thank you Allan,good one.- oxox hugs Anne-Lise

    Williams Avatar Allan Williams
    Date: 1/20/2012 2:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, it took me longer to work out how to post it and then enter it into this meter contest, than it did to write it+