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Time Is Evidence

long long way to go still remains for us ahead the World will win goals a seed becomes tree the Sun rises and sets well fruits of perfection man did never cause causation made in to all time is evidence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/29/2012 7:03:00 PM
A powerful piece bl. Great last verse... I am in total agreement with you my friend! Love Jack
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Date: 9/24/2012 7:57:00 AM
bl i think this is very profound, and very powerful
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Date: 9/23/2012 1:37:00 PM
Nice thoughts for our world , BL. Especially I like the first one and second one.
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Date: 9/23/2012 10:06:00 AM
very inspiring..i really enjoy your write tonight..:) luv SK
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Date: 9/23/2012 9:36:00 AM
always profound is your poetry bl .. u make the reader think beyond the normal realm of things .. another piece to cheris my friend ..luv
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