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Time Becomes Mindless

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Time Becomes Mindless

We were nobody to each other.
Suddenly you appeared, my world went upside down.
How did opposite come?
I'm nothing like you, you are depressed, careless & hardheaded yet you found a way into my heart. 
Whispered such sweet words.
Shouldn't we be natural enemies?
Having you move on while being stuck on the past.
The unspoken words started to come around.
Did we move to fast, were we blind?
You & I shouldn't, couldn't be together.
All this time, we werent on the same page, How come?
We tried to offer what we didn't have...
Time wasted, words spent, & feelings disappeared....

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  1. Date: 10/16/2012 5:31:00 AM
    great write with a touch of sadness,don't call it wasted time,learning process Divine,check out my Girls Girls

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 3:20:00 PM
    so sad...hugs, catie :)