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Time

Time does simply fly passing clouds on it's way Dark or fluffy white below them life has say Even the likes of I, who I met, where I went Sporadic, or for a reason, I to there was sent It's where I went that matters, and who I went to meet For me it was a she of beauty, I'm swept from my feet She, this dark haired wonderment, I soon to greet Four days beside my side, gracing ones cities streets These days of happening past, two years on passing clouds If I were to show my heart, inside this Scotsman proud For in it time can't change, or ever to tear it apart If I had to go back to our together again, I'd joyously restart <*>
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 2/11/2014 8:35:00 PM
well done James,, . Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/15/2014 6:42:00 AM
Inspiring thoughts to give up something to relive and congrats on the fine win, James
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Date: 11/2/2013 3:27:00 PM
Very rich emotionly i find this James, am glad to have thought about looking you up, Wishing you inspiration and best of results..' Joe..)
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Date: 11/1/2013 12:22:00 PM
Romantic lines penned for a special lady..Enjoyed reading this one today..Soup Mail soon..Sara
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Date: 10/31/2013 7:55:00 PM
Well-said, James! Bless you and take care! Your Souper-Friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Date: 10/30/2013 5:02:00 AM
Lovely expressions on love and happiness
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Date: 10/30/2013 12:06:00 AM
Holy moly...look who is back posting poetry..Im so happy you read my post awhile ago and more happy to read this beautiful poem just now.Don t be a stranger : )
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Date: 10/29/2013 7:52:00 PM
A beautifully written romantic poem assures to be written from the heart James. I loved it!
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Date: 10/29/2013 7:13:00 PM
a nice poem indeed.
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