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Tickle Me ~haiku

Happy silly boy
Dusty straw hair flying free
Mommy... tickle me

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Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/27/2009 9:49:00 AM

Wonderful haiku, My daughter loves it when I tickle her and she tickles me also, we have so much fun together..Very sweet~ Great Job, GB, Always Tyesha

John Rhinem
Date: 4/2/2012 4:27:00 PM

..."Owww, I Would Love To Tickle Your Sweeet Beauty ~ My Luv, Rachel %

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/22/2009 11:18:00 AM

Charming and exceedingly cute! Lovely word choices and a happy-go-lucky atmosphere... Best wishes, Keith

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/22/2009 6:13:00 AM

Aww, so precious. My kids are both grown but I am expecting first grandchild in the fall - can't wait! Wonderful haiku! Love, Shar

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 3/21/2009 4:17:00 PM

this so fun to read...filled so much joy and brings a smile to every face who reads it.....thnx for all ur comments n by da way I am a young spirit of just 14 years...lol...smiles and love from Maryam*