Thunderstorm

THUNDERSTORM

Thick oppressive sultriness all day
Then  cool breezes, a cloud signals
The sails of a fighting Armada, 
With massed grey galleons 

Swelling with threatening guns  -
The flashing of their watery cannon beats
Their terrifying cacophony
In the cross-trees and shivering  sheets  -

Hurled balls of rain, rain, rain
So thick the air is opaque;
Rain without end, Noah’s rain,
Making deck drain and scupper shake

Riddling the sea with bullet-hole spray.
Now  empty cannon fall still and silent:
The Armada has drifted away.
The air is dry and clear and spent.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 1:09 PM
Love this Sydney the grey massed galleons clouds that just what a storm conjures up to me xx
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